I'd recommend to use more than one style of transitioning as it gets rather stale fairly quickly and doesn't look too great. Also try to sound more exciting, it will entice the audience even more and get them more excited about whats happening. A lot of the time you sounded fairly bland. You get a few bugs and static bits when you get a bit louder in your mic. I'd look into whats causing that and see if you could fix it in post.